My House

My House

Cosy bed dug in the carpet. Soft pillow waiting for someone to sleep on it. As a burning fire warms the house.

A lazy tabby cat sleeps in front of that fire. 

Soft grey cat fur stays on the arm chair. 

a busy mum cooking dinner. 

Quiet hallway creaks.The creepy closet door swishes to and fro in the light misty wind.

Sense Poem

Lily

She smells like … shampoo and roses

She hears … the sound of the quiet orchard

She sees the chickens running around in the cop

She loves the taste of chocolate

She feels soft and gentle

She makes me feel happy.

The Acrostic Poem.

When it’s winter people stay inside and wraps up warm

Its cold and frosty outside

Now it’s cold now it’s frosty everyone keeps warm

The frost shows on the green grass showing how cold it is

Everyone keeps warm before bed, on a cold winters night

Raining and raining when will it go away

When it’s winter I think about the warmth

Every second of the day I wish I was in my bed.

Although it’s cold I still play and have fun.

The trees have no leaves on them.

Has it ever stopped raining I think every day I walk to school in the cold rain

Every winter morning it seems like it’s starts to rain.

Rain rain will it ever stop raining?

Poem

 Nicole:

  Nice, kind friend

  Imaginative Thinking

  Cool personality

  Original and self being

a Likeable friend

  Educated brain

  Amazing at what I do

  Special in every way

  Happy every day

  Well being self controls

  Elegant sometime

  Lovable, likeable and caring

  Loose person

Holidays

Success Criteria

DEEP FEATURES Brainstorms to identify main ideas to be used in writing. Uses most of the main ideas in the writing. Uses paragraphs and sequences ideas. Attempts to end writing with a simple conclusions.

SURFACE FEATURES Spells most words correctly. Uses capital letters, full stops, commas, apostrophes, question marks, exclamation marks.

THE REWORKER / EDITOR Rereads writing to edit out information that does not improve the message. Rereads writing to edit in words and phrases that improve the message. Uses a dictionary to identify and check spelling attempts. Checks writing for basic punctuation.

It was the last day of the holidays and I was thinking of all the fun stuff I did in the holidays

and this is what I did….

It was Monday, the first day of the holidays and I was going to my Nana's house. She lived by the mountains. When I got there she said she had surprise for me and my brother. When mum left, and we said goodbye next Nana pulled two presents from behind her back. Then she said “Go ahead open them.” I got a Rapunzel Lego set. William got a toy from the new transformers movie. Me and William played with our new toys. I spent the whole afternoon  building my lego set. When I finished I called Nana and she said “Are you finished?” and I said “Yes!”  

It was the second Tuesday of the holidays and I was going to go for a  bush walk with my friend Ruby. We walked down the trail and Ruby walked with me. We found a waterfall at the corner of the trail. After that we went up a path that lead to the beginning of the trail. We walked up the stairs like we started, and then we went on bus and went home.

Now its Sunday the last day of the holidays tomorrow its school.

A moment in time...

             When I Sleep I Feel

I heard mum playing on the family iPad.

I heard dad walking down the corridor.

I saw my teddy bear between my arms.

I saw the light from mum and dads room

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I felt the book from under my pillow.

I felt the cold icy water  beside me.

I wondered if all my dreams will come true.

I wondered if my toys have a party when I’m asleep.

Stoney Creek Ranch Camp

When I grow up...

As part of our topic I have been thinking about myself and what makes me special. This has led to me thinking about what I would like to be when I grow up.

I made a ToonDoo about it.

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